Time/Why Are You So Strange? ausgegraben aus der Sammlung :D

[Keithrichards]

Time

Verse:
Time and place disappear in the shade
And
You know you can’t change anything
Don’t look back
You can’t change the past

Chorus:
Time will only bring tears and pain
But you just can’t change it
The time you had you couldn’t have made
Any better
Time is the endless rival
On the way to light and darkness

Verse 2:
Every time I went through the streets
I could imagine seeing you near me

Why I couldn’t I do something about it
I was at the wrong place
At the wrong time

2 x Chorus








Why Are You So Strange?

Verse:
Why should I always have to suffer?
I the person
Who always give my best?
I am the one
Who you always could depend on?
But you leave me alone
Why?

Chorus:
Why are you so strange?
Am I the one you’re jealous of?
Could I somehow help you?
Why do you keep on so strange?
Tell me
I am there
If you need me

Verse 2:
Could I help you in some way?
When I think of the good times we had
Together
Why do you do this to me?
Didn’t I endure enough?
I was always the dude at your side
But it seems nothing to you
2 x Chorus

 

[desgraca]

Time

Verse:
Time and place disappear in the shade
And
You know you can’t change anything
Don’t look back
You can’t change the past

Chorus:
Time will only bring tears and pain
But you just can’t change it
The time you had you couldn’t have made
Any better
Time is the endless rival
On the way to light and darkness

Verse 2:
Every time I went through the streets
I could imagine seeing you near me

Why I couldn’t I do something about it
why couldn't i do anything about it
I was at the wrong place
At the wrong time

2 x Chorus

vielleicht hat riff zu dem song noch ein paar tipps, wie man den refrain aufpeppen könnte,,,,vom englischen her passt das sonst soweit.







Why Are You So Strange?

Verse:
Why should I always have to suffer?
I the person
me, the person who always gives his best?
Who always give my best?
I am the one
Who you always could depend on
But you leave me alone
Why?

Chorus:
Why are you so strange?
Am I the one you’re jealous of?
Could I somehow help you?
could i help you somehow?
Why do you keep on so strange?
keep on being so strange
Tell me
I am there
i'll be there oder i'm here
If you need me

Verse 2:
Could I help you in some way?
When I think of the good times we had
Together
Why do you do this to me?
Didn’t I endure enough?
didnt i go through enough?
I was always the dude at your side
But it seems nothing to you
but it seems it means nothing to you
2 x Chorus

wundert mich, dass das alte texte sind, die sind eine verbesserung zu den anderen

 

[Keithrichards]

Naja da hat ich aber schon was Hilfe bei,aber die anderen Songs find ich eigentlich auch in Ordnung, die ich geschrieben habe.Die haben mir besonders dabei geholfen das ich es jetzt besser allein auf die Reihe bekomme,und das ist ja schon mal was.Nebenbei lernt man einige Vokabel damit man genug Input hat .

 

[desgraca]

achso, verstehe janee, wollte jetzt auch die anderen texte nicht niederreden oder so, das einzige ist halt, dass die grammatik bei denen hier besser passte, aber das ja nich soo das problem

 

[Redheadgirl]

Zitat von Keithrichards
Time

Verse:
Time and place disappear in the shade
And
You know you can't change anything
Don't look back
You can't change the past

Chorus:
Time will only bring tears and pain
But you just can't change it
The time you had you couldn't have made "it"
Any better
Time is the endless rival
On the way to light and darkness

Verse 2:
Every time I "walked" through the streets
I "imagined" you near me

Why couldn't I do something about it
I was at the wrong place
At the wrong time <-- die beiden sätze passen meiner meinung nicht ganz, weil wort
zu wort übersetztung, ist leicht holprig, aber mir fällt auch nix
2 x Chorus besseres ein

vielleicht hat riff zu dem song noch ein paar tipps, wie man den refrain aufpeppen könnte,,,,vom englischen her passt das sonst soweit.







Why Are You So Strange?

Verse:
Why should I always have to suffer?
me, the person who always gives his best?
I was the one <---ab hier entweder alles past tense oder alles
Who you always "could count" on present tense aber nicht beides bitte
But you left me alone
Why?

Chorus:
Why are you so strange?
Am I the one you're jealous of?
Could I help you somehow ?
Why do you keep on being so strange?
Tell me
I am there
i'll be there oder i'm here
If you need me

Verse 2:
Could I help you in some way?
I think of the good times we had <--- das when passte da nicht
Together
Why do you do this to me?
didnt i go through enough?
I was always the "one on" your side
but it seems it means nothing to you
2 x Chorus



so ich hab da ma versucht reinzukorrigieren. hab noch nie zitiert oder so deshalb hab ichs nochma in"" gesetzt weil ich kein plan hab ob alles so klappt wie ich mir das vorstelle .
mit einigen worten könnte ich mir vorstellen, dass es schwierig wird es zu singen, auch rhythmus mässig passt es noch net von wg zeilen länge blabla... hoffe ich konnt schon ma n bischen helfen.

 

[desgraca]

hmmmmm.....von den verbesserungen in "" und <---
machts ehrlich gesagt nur

Every time I "walked" through the streets

besser als vorher,,,,allerdings sind mir noch ein paar bessere präpositionen eingefallen :
at your side
by your side
at the wrong place
in the wrong place

das sind zwar sache, wo die präposition eigentlich quasi frei wählbar sind, aber das sind eben die, die man eher wählen würde

 

[Keithrichards]

Danke sehr , ich bin für jede Hilfe dankbar