In the dark (Rapcore/ Nu-Metal)

[A Piece of Jewe]

Wie findet ihr den Text? Soll so in die Richtung Rapcore/ Nu-Metal gehen, heisst: gerappte Strophen, gesungener Refrain.

Strophe 1


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]lying in the dark awake[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]all my hope just faded[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]lying in the dark awake[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]all illusions, they stagnated[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]i tried to fight my bringers of sadness[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]but in the night I am defenseless[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]by day I can hide from reality[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]but in the night it catches me[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]blows me away[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]-all my smiles- fade away[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I can´t touch them, they won´t stay[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]-all my dreams- fade away[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I can not touch what they preyed[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]ain´t I the one who´s guilty[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]ain´t I the one who let it happen[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]am I the casualty[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]or am I the delinquent[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I am alone again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I can´t accept[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I am alone again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I´ve to accept[/FONT]


Refrain


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]lying in the dark awake[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]all my hope just faded[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]lying in this hell again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]where all illusions stagnated[/FONT]


Strophe 2


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]and everytime I try to drown myself in fantasies[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I can feel the self-esteem running out of me[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]a loss that destroys hope again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]a loss taking me clother to the end[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]and I tried to find the happiness[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]tried to fight the sadness[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]but the only result is, that I got deeper in this shit[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I´ve had my attacks[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]but they were all fought back[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I´m nothing but a loser[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]yes, I´m the one who´s guilty[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I guess I´m the one who let it happen[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I´m not the casualty[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I´m just a delinquent[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I am alone again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I can´t accept[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I am alone again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I must accept[/FONT]



<Refrain>



Bridge


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]all my smiles have faded away, I can´t touch them it´s too late[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]all my dreams have faded away, I can not touch what I´ve preyed[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]in the dark everything´s so clear[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]the world does not want me here[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]in the dark everything´s so clear[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I don´t belong to here[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]and now I force myself to sleep [/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]to calm myself in soften dreams[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]anticipating a day full of lies[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I don´t have the grit to look the truth in the eyes[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]one more time I try to hide[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]in my dreams I finally find[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]hope hope hope hope hope[/FONT]


[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]but then I wake up again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I know this is the end[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]I wake up again[/FONT]
[FONT=BatangChe, monospace]this is the end[/FONT]

<Refrain>


Danke schonmal. Bin für alle Verbesserungen offen.