Hart To Day

[miss understood]

Edit : Kann ein admin den Threadnamen in Hard To Say umändern biddö

Mein 4tter Sontext -.- da ich den ersten nicht dazu zähle weil der so doof geworden ist sage ich mal 3tter.

Somethings are hard to say, I've fear that I go the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes,then I cant speak I've hide many lies
I have many worrys I'll tell you my storys

HARD!!! HARD!!! HARD TO SAY!!!DONT GO THE WRONG WAY!!!

Before I speak and you listen me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way,than forgot what I''ve say
Its hard to tell , my guilt feel from me to spell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My guilt feel speak in my head, they'll make me dead

SHUT UP!!!SHUT UP!!!I WOULDN'T HEAR YOUR LIES!!!SHUT UP!!!

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, than I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel these full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride

DONT CRY!!!SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!!!
DONT HIDE!!!MAKE YOUR PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!

Someone think I'm good,I've never show them my pain
They've never understood, someone leave me in the rain
I cant trust, they became dust
I was confused, people have me confused

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, than I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel these full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride
​

 

[MiNoRiTy]

Edit : Kann ein admin den Threadnamen in Hard To Say umändern biddö

Mein 4tter Sontext -.- da ich den ersten nicht dazu zähle weil der so doof geworden ist sage ich mal 3tter.

Some things are hard to say, I've feared that I go the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes,then I can't speak I've hidden many lies
I have many worrys I'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD!!! HARD TO SAY!!!DONT GO THE WRONG WAY!!!

Before I speak and you listen to me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way,then forget what I've said
Its hard to tell , my guilt feel from me to spell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings speak in my head, they'll make me dead

SHUT UP!!!SHUT UP!!!I WOULDN'T HEAR YOUR LIES!!!SHUT UP!!!

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel this full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride (wenns auf die dreams bezogen is dann isses richtig ansonsten "it kills me inside" weil pain=einzahl)

DONT CRY!!!SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!!!
DONT HIDE!!!MAKE YOUR PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!

Someone thinks I'm good,I've never shown him my pain
They've never understood, someone leave me in the rain (wer ist "They"?)
I cant trust, they became dust
I was confused, people have me confused

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel this full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride (s.o.)
​

soweit so gut, nur bei der grammatik musste auf die tempusformen achten da geht viel durcheinander

mfg

 

[miss understood]

Some things are hard to say, I've feared that I go the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes,then I can't speak I've hidden many lies
I have many worrys I'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD!!! HARD TO SAY!!!DONT GO THE WRONG WAY!!!

Before I speak and you listento me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way,then forget what I've said
Its hard to tell , my guilt feel from me to spell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings speak in my head, they'll make me dead

SHUT UP!!!SHUT UP!!!I WOULDN'T HEAR YOUR LIES!!!SHUT UP!!!

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel this full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride (wenns auf die dreams bezogen is dann isses richtig ansonsten "it kills me inside" weil pain=einzahl) jo stimmt ist auf dreams bezogen

DONT CRY!!!SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!!!
DONT HIDE!!!MAKE YOUR PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!PRIDE!!!

Some thinks I'm good,I've never show them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain (wer ist "They"?)ich merke grad someone/jemand ist falsch ich meinte damit "einige denken" das They war aus auf Einige bezogen,deswegen stand da auch them und nicht him =P
I cant trust, they became dust
I was confused, people have me confused

Sometimes...
If I make a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall in my bed
I feel this full pain in my dreams
They kill me inside, kill my pride

 

[Cornholio]

Some things are hard to say, I('ve) fear(ed) that I went/walked the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, (then i'm reminded to hide many lies) then I know I've been hiding many lies
I'll have many worries now I'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T GO THE WRONG WAY! GO THE WAY ist aber doof. walk evtl.

Before I'll speak and you'll listen to me, look forward and see...
That/When ? you found your real way, then forget what I've said
It's hard to spell, my guilt feel to tell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings speak/ring/bang in my head, they'll make me dead/until i am dead ...kill reimt nich

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WOULDN'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!
Du würdest eh nicht zuhören ok. I won't hat aber mehr Druck !

Sometimes...
If I do/show a (short and) litte smile, soon then/afterwards I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, (and) i fall into my bed
I feel this/the full pain (even) in my dreams this pain follows me (even) into my dreams
They kill me inside, killing my pride*

DONT CRY! SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!
DONT HIDE! MAKE YOUR? PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE! <--Bitte was ? make you proud? k.a.

Some/People think I'm good/happy, I've never shown them my (real) pain
They've never understood, some leave/left me in the rain / some leave you in the rain
I can't trust, they became dust
I was confused, people got me confused

Sometimes...
If I show a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and fall into my bed
I feel this/the full pain (even) in my dreams
They kill me inside, killing my pride/They're killing me inside, killing my pride*

feinfein

 

[miss understood]

Some things are hard to say, I fear that I went the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, then I know I've been hiding many lies
I'll have many worries nowI'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T WALK THE WRONG WAY! GO THE WAY ist aber doof. walk evtl. Kein Problem ^^

Before I'll speak and you'll listen to me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way, then forget what I've said
It's hard to spell, my guilt feel to tell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings speak/ring/bang in my head, until i am dead ...kill reimt nich
Was ring/bang gibt es das im englischen?

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WON'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!
Du würdest eh nicht zuhören ok. I won't hat aber mehr Druck !
-.- ich bin die jenige die erzählt,das großgeschriebene ich für meinen Sänger den ich noch suche Wont ist auch besser zum schreien da es nicht so lang ist

Sometimes...
If I doa short and litte smile, soon thenI turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall into my bed
I feel thisfull pain even into my dreams
They kill me inside, killing my pride*

DONT CRY! SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!
DONT HIDE! MAKE YOUR! PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE! <--Bitte was ? make you proud? k.a.
YOUR ist schon richtig habe mich wohl vertippt =P

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain
I can't trust, they became dust
People got me confused

Sometimes...
If I show a short and litte smile, then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and fall into my bed
I feel this full pain even in my dreams
They're killing me inside, killing my pride*

Ich hoffe dass das so geht nur bei ring/band weis ich nicht was du meinst

 

[Cornholio]

My debt feelings speak/ring/bang in my head, until i am dead
Was ring/bang gibt es das im englischen? Joa und beides besser als speak, denn das will ich nicht personifizieren.

DONT HIDE! MAKE YOUR! PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE! <--Bitte was ? make you proud? k.a.
YOUR ist schon richtig habe mich wohl vertippt =P ja aber es ergibt keinen Sinn. Was soll das denn heißen?

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain
I can't trust, they become dust
People got me confused

 

[miss understood]

DONT HIDE! MAKE YOUR! PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE! <--Bitte was ? make you proud? k.a.
ja aber es ergibt keinen Sinn. Was soll das denn heißen? bilde/erstelle /baue (k.a) dir deinen stolz
aber wenns doch PROUND heissen sollte,würde es sich nicht reimen dann müsste ich evt. where's your pride oderso hinschreiben

 

[Cornholio]

Build your pride. oder Rebuild your pride.
immer noch besser als make, das ist käse

 

[miss understood]

Okieee danke ^^ das grosgeschriebene wird von jemand anderem gesungen nicht von mir das ist die Person der/dem ich das alles erzähle
Jetzt ist eure Meinung gefragt -.-

Some things are hard to say, I fear that I went the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, then I know I've been hiding many lies
I'll have many worries nowI'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T WALK THE WRONG WAY!

Before I'll speak and you'll listen to me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way, then forget what I've said
It's hard to spell, my guilt feel to tell
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings ring in my head, until i am dead

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WON'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!

*Sometimes...
If I doa short and litte smile, soon thenI turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall into my bed
I feel thisfull pain even into my dreams
They kill me inside, killing my pride

DONT CRY! SEE FORWARD AND SMILE!
DONT HIDE! BUILD YOUR PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE!

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain
I can't trust, they become dust
People got me confused

(*repeat)

 

[Cornholio]

Some things are hard to say, I fear that I went the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, then I know I've been hiding many lies
I have many worries, now, I'll tell you my story

HARD! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T WALK THE WRONG WAY!

Before I'll speak and you'll listen to me, look forward and see...
If you found your real way, then forget what I've said
It's hard to spell, my guilt feel to tell
Some secrets kill me inside, are killing my pride
My debt feelings ring in my head, until i am dead

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WON'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!

*Sometimes...
If I show a short litte smile, soon then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, as i fall into my bed
I feel this aching pain even in my dreams
They kill me inside, killing my pride

DON'T CRY! LOOK FORWARD AND SMILE!
DON'T HIDE! BUILD YOUR PRIDE PRIDE PRIDE delay -.-

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some left me in the rain
I can't trust, so they became dust
People got me confused, left alone and abused-.-

(*repeat x1000)

 

[desgraca]

blubblub

Okieee danke ^^ das grosgeschriebene wird von jemand anderem gesungen nicht von mir das ist die Person der/dem ich das alles erzähle
Jetzt ist eure Meinung gefragt -.-

Some things are hard to say, I fear that I went the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, then I know I've been hiding many lies
I'll have many worries nowI'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T WALK THE WRONG WAY!

Before I speak and you listen to me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way, then forgot what I'd said
It's hard to spell, my guilt feel to tell
was ist guilt feel, und was soll spell da heißen?
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings ring in my head, until i am dead

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WON'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!

*Sometimes...
If I do a short and a litte smile, soon then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall on my bed
I feel this full pain even in my dreams diesen vollen schmerz?da würd ich nochn treffenderes adjektiv suchen
They kill me inside, killing my pride

DONT CRY! look FORWARD AND SMILE!
DONT HIDE! BUILD YOUR PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE!

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain
I can't trust, they become dust
People got me confused

(*repeat)

 

[miss understood]

Some things are hard to say, I fear that I went the wrong way
When I see your beautiful eyes, then I know I've been hiding many lies
I'll have many worries nowI'll tell you my stories

HARD!!! HARD! HARD TO SAY! DON'T WALK THE WRONG WAY!

Before I speak and you listen to me, look forward and see...
That you found your real way, then forgot what I'd said
It's hard to tell, debt feelings feel to span
was ist guilt feel, und was soll spell da heißen?
schuld gefühle -.- wenn debt feelings nicht schulgefühle heisst kennst du noch einen anderen begriff dafür ausser sense/feeling of guild
Some secrets kill me inside, kill my pride
My debt feelings ring in my head, until i am dead

SHUT UP! SHUT UP! I WON'T HEAR YOUR LIES! SHUT UP!

*Sometimes...
If I do a short and a litte smile, soon then I turn back and cry
My eyes become red, and i fall on my bed
I feel a full pain even in my dreams diesen vollen schmerz?da würd ich nochn treffenderes adjektiv suchen
They kill me inside, killing my pride

DONT CRY! LOOK FORWARD AND SMILE!
DONT HIDE! BUILD YOUR PRIDE! PRIDE! PRIDE!

People think I'm good, I've never shown them my pain
They've never understood, some leave me in the rain
I can't trust, they become dust
People got me confused

(*repeat)

 

[Cornholio]

nimmst also die Nate-Version? OK dann klinke ich mich aus.

 

[desgraca]

nimmst also die Nate-Version? OK dann klinke ich mich aus.

muss ich das checken?
ich hatte eigentlich die als letztes dastehende version durchgekuckt,,,,


@miss: remorse =gewissensbisse würd mir einfallen, bad conscience=schlechtes gewissen, ansonsten einfach guilt

 

[miss understood]

nimmst also die Nate-Version? OK dann klinke ich mich aus.

Der hat das doch verbessert damit es verständlicher ist ist nichts gegen dich

 

[Cornholio]

Der hat das doch verbessert damit es verständlicher ist ist nichts gegen dich

ja, aber er hat mich übersprungen und ne Kleinigkeit verschlimmbessert

 

[desgraca]

ja, aber er hat mich übersprungen und ne Kleinigkeit verschlimmbessert

er hat den text aus DEINEM post 10 da oben genommen und neigt außerdem nicht dazu, zu verschlimmbessern
willst du drüber diskutieren?

 

[Cornholio]

er hat den text aus DEINEM post 10

Nope, hasst 9 genommen.
kannst ja da drüber gehen.

then forgot what I'd said

ist nicht Sinngemäß. Afaik sind wir in einer Art Dialog, so if... then forget it. Genauso imo die beiden 'll Formen.
Kann ja Miss artikulieren.

 

[desgraca]

ist nicht Sinngemäß. Afaik sind wir in einer Art Dialog, so if... then forget it. Genauso imo die beiden 'll Formen.
Kann ja Miss artikulieren.

in dem satz hat ein absolutes zeitenchaos geherrscht, wo jeder aufmerksame hörer gekuckt hätte wie ein eichhörnchen
durch das before ist die vorzeitigkeit ausgedrückt, damit sind die will-formen unnötig,,,,und stimmt, ich hab post 9 erwischt, sorry

 

[Cornholio]

in dem satz hat ein absolutes zeitenchaos geherrscht, wo jeder aufmerksame hörer gekuckt hätte wie ein eichhörnchen

Der Satz ist auch so komisch genug.

That you found your real way, than forgot what I''ve say
wird zu then forget what I've said
wird zu then forgot what I'd said

That = If? dann If you...--> then forget...

durch das before ist die vorzeitigkeit ausgedrückt, damit sind die will-formen unnötig

unnötig, aber so gefällts mir