Hallo & welcome!
Sehr hübsch Dein Text. Habe mir die Freiheit erlaubt, ihn ein wenig zu überarbeiten. Zum einen gibt es ein paar Rechtschreibfehler (being anstatt beeing...), kein Problem. Ein paar Zeilen habe ich leicht verändert, zum einen der Rhythmik wegen, zum anderen um des besseren Verständnis willen, damit auch ein Engländer nicht in's grübeln kommt, was Du versuchst, mitzuteilen.
Ansonsten habe ich Deine Übersetzung zu Rate gezogen, hoffe, das findet Deine Zustimmung.
Bei mir sähe es dann so aus:
Hey you
who are you?
Who ever you are,
please listen, won’t you?
So confused,
feelin’ cold and small,
Feelin' used
Feelin' empty at all
Is there anyone to hear my voice?
Is there anyone to offer me a choice
to make it all good, give’em back what i took
to be with me after all, to catch me when i fall
Made so many faults
had so many doubts
i'm sorry for just being me
falling for you on my knees
They shouted at me, hurt so bad
i just need a hand so where are you at?
Give me a word or show me a view
Or write it in a letter, 'cause i'm singing for you
Is there anyone to hear my voice?
Is there anyone to offer me a choice
to make it all good, give’em back what i took
to be with me after all, to catch me when i fall
standing here on a building of glass
looking up to an upper-class
If anyone hears me, please come around
i feel like I'm dying and just wanna be found
i just want to shout out over all of those roofs
can't go on anymore, don't wanna be proofed
look at your words and don’t tell me I´m dumb
please come and hold me before i can jump
Is there anyone to hear my voice?
Is there anyone to offer me a choice
to make it all good, give’em back what i took
to be with me after all, to catch me when i fall
Is there anyone to hear my voice?
Is there anyone to offer me a choice
to make it all good, give’em back what i took
to be with me after all, to catch me when i fall
catch me when i fall....