wine from my tears

[Der_Blindschleicher]

Tach, liebe Kreativlinge!

hier mein erster zaghafter Versuch einen Songtext auf english zu schreiben. Ich hoffe, er wirkt nicht zu banal. Habe versucht, es einfach zu halten, wie neuerdings bei meinen deutschen Texten auch. Kritik und Verbesserungsvorschläge hoch erwünscht! Grüße und schönes Wochenende!


You`re the best
thing in years.

You made wine
from my tears.

There`s no one
like you

changed my life
out of the blue.

Vers 2:

Take me home
I am here

No bitter feelings
nothing to fear

The end
of bitter years.

Cause
you made
wine…

...from my tears

bridge:

they looked me in the eyes
told me
„we love you like a son“.

Then they left me in the rain
to prove
I am not the chosen one

Refrain:

You pulled me out
of heavy rain.

On the way home
you ride the train.

I can`t remember
from where i came

you made wine
from my pain.

Your words have wings
my soul got ears

you made wine
from my tears


Vers 3

you`re the one
i belong

I am a line
of your song.

Spin me round
for years an years

make more wine
from my tears


Vers 4

Don`t be shy
flip the switch

I´m your King
be my witch.

Play upon
my darkest fears

and make wine
from my tears

bridge:

they looked me in the eyes
told me
„you`re not, where you belong“

then they left me in the cold
to prove
I am a fool,
i got it wrong


Refrain:

You pulled me out
of heavy rain.

On the way home
you ride the train.

I can`t remember
from where i came

you made wine
from my pain.

Your words have wings
my soul got ears

and you made wine
from my tears