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Hier also mein erster Text. Bin sehr unerfahren und wollte mich einfach mal ausprobieren. Weiß auch noch nicht so recht in welches musikalische Genre das gehen soll (grobe Eingrenzungen gibt es natürlich), aber ich wollte den Text einfach mal festhalten. Der Refrain macht mich noch nicht so wirklich glücklich.
Wäre an ein paar Anregungen sehr interessiert.
Walking down the Street
I cross the street
with an inner feeling of calmness
and a strange satisfaction
the sinking sun's lightening is blinding me
leaves the cross-walk in a new brightness.
I cross the street
while warmth flows through me
and releases something in me
unforeseen longing freed itself
life is striking me.
I want to capture, I want to taste them.
I want to enjoy and melt into them.
I want to find such moments again.
Suddenly I wish
that the way home
could last a bit longer.
I know that this is
certainly not the case.
Gentle tone escort me
through the blue headphones.
Let the way laying before me
be even more beautiful.
Still I want to capture, I want to taste them.
I want to enjoy and melt into them.
I want to find such moments again.
I move foot by foot forward
beloved people marching through my mind.
Flighty and all at once
life feels just too good.
I want to capture such moments.
I want to release them again.
Wäre an ein paar Anregungen sehr interessiert.
Walking down the Street
I cross the street
with an inner feeling of calmness
and a strange satisfaction
the sinking sun's lightening is blinding me
leaves the cross-walk in a new brightness.
I cross the street
while warmth flows through me
and releases something in me
unforeseen longing freed itself
life is striking me.
I want to capture, I want to taste them.
I want to enjoy and melt into them.
I want to find such moments again.
Suddenly I wish
that the way home
could last a bit longer.
I know that this is
certainly not the case.
Gentle tone escort me
through the blue headphones.
Let the way laying before me
be even more beautiful.
Still I want to capture, I want to taste them.
I want to enjoy and melt into them.
I want to find such moments again.
I move foot by foot forward
beloved people marching through my mind.
Flighty and all at once
life feels just too good.
I want to capture such moments.
I want to release them again.
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