hey jay-p.....am besten immer für verbesserungen den kompletten text zitieren und anmerkungen dann zeilenweise drunter.....
hat sich einfach am ehesten bewährt.
sweetest pain
I gave you my heart
gave it to you, my love
and you tore it apart
and I tell you my friend,
Ill never love again
sweetest kiss
I got it from you
you broke my heart
ripped it in two
and I tell you my friend,
Ill never love again
sweetest word
that you said to me
I love you my dear,
but we will never be
Bin nicht sicher ob das so geht.
bin mir sicher dass das leider so nicht geht ....."but i need to be free" oder sowas evtl?
and I tell you my friend,
Ill never love again
nachdenklicher Song, aber nicht depri: "Paralyzed"
Ive been waiting in the darkness
das "the" kann raus, klingt dann besser...
with no one else around
couldnt see the light of day
and couldnt hear no sound
watching all the chances
waving, passing by
standing like a monolith
standing there/standing up/upright
too afraid to try
too afraid to try
.
one day, where I lied
one day when i lied
a girl passed me by
she was such a beauty
I felt stuck in time
then my heart beat on
she was nearly out of sight
I could have reached for her
too afraid to try
too afraid to try
lied 2 find ich echt gelungen, simpel aber doch gut
Zitat:
Party und biertrink lied: "saturday night"
3. Lied:
a) It was the way that I dream Geht mMn so nicht
entweder That's the way that I dream
oder That's the way that I dreamed
Bin aber nicht 100%ig sicher.
Im walking home, with broken bones
Being as tired as I can be
das "being" klingt ungeschickt, kannst du streichen
Once had a girl, left her on the road
She was torturing me
und den zusammenhang in der strophe muss man nicht finden oda?
It was a night, one of a kind
The band was playing loud and tight
And everyone was feeling alright
That's the way that I dream
that's the way i dream, sonst haste 2 that im satz
of a Saturday night
und eigentlich hieße is "thats the kind of saturday night i dream of"
Now Im at home, all alone
My head is killing me
As I try to open my shoes
as i'm trying
I fall to my knees
It was a night, one of a kind
The band was playing loud and tight
And everyone was feeling alright
That's the way that I dream
of a Saturday night
Zitat:
Ballade, bissal schmalz, für die verflossenen: "sorry"
I've never meant to hurt you
i never meant
But somehow it just slipped out of control
I've never insisted on being perfect
i never insisted
But that wont help you now, I know
And if you did listen to me
I would say Im sorry
Thinking bout the time we had together
I know it wasnt bad at all
I've never said it would be forever
i never said
But that wont help you now, I know
And if you did listen to me
I would say Im sorry
Sorry for the pain Ive caused
Sorry for the things I had to do
Sorry for breaking up
Sorry for being so cruel
! Vielen Dank für die Aufklärung...
