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So, mal wieder ein recht einfacher Text von mir, ich bin mir sprachlich aber an manchen Stellen nicht ganz so sicher und ob der Inhalt wirklich gut rüberkommt, also ich wär sehr dankbar über Kritik und Anmerkungen aller Art![Smile :) :)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
Once in a while
A houndred faces fading fast
Cross my way and disappear
They turn the presence into past
By breathing seconds, gulping tears
A hundred feet that walk too fast
Rush like a race has begun
And I'm just watching people pass
Take a seat and watch them run
And once in a while I am lonely, when people pass me by
'Cause all I see are faces crowned with unfamiliar eyes
And once in a while I am happy, when I see someone who smiles
'Cause then the pain is gone and the rain is gone for a moment once in a while
And city life can tease your mind
With all the lights that blind your eyes
And there's no sun that you could find
'Cause scrawny buildings scrape the skies
And when you're lonely, when you're down
Take your time, it can be done
Take a seat and look around
Just relax and let them run
And once in a while I am lonely, when people pass me by
'Cause all I see are faces crowned with unfamiliar eyes
And once in a while I am happy, when I see someone who smiles
'Cause then the pain is gone and the rain is gone for a moment once in a while
So, mal wieder ein recht einfacher Text von mir, ich bin mir sprachlich aber an manchen Stellen nicht ganz so sicher und ob der Inhalt wirklich gut rüberkommt, also ich wär sehr dankbar über Kritik und Anmerkungen aller Art
Once in a while
A houndred faces fading fast
Cross my way and disappear
They turn the presence into past
By breathing seconds, gulping tears
A hundred feet that walk too fast
Rush like a race has begun
And I'm just watching people pass
Take a seat and watch them run
And once in a while I am lonely, when people pass me by
'Cause all I see are faces crowned with unfamiliar eyes
And once in a while I am happy, when I see someone who smiles
'Cause then the pain is gone and the rain is gone for a moment once in a while
And city life can tease your mind
With all the lights that blind your eyes
And there's no sun that you could find
'Cause scrawny buildings scrape the skies
And when you're lonely, when you're down
Take your time, it can be done
Take a seat and look around
Just relax and let them run
And once in a while I am lonely, when people pass me by
'Cause all I see are faces crowned with unfamiliar eyes
And once in a while I am happy, when I see someone who smiles
'Cause then the pain is gone and the rain is gone for a moment once in a while
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