''My Grief Is Better Than Your Grief'' /// (Post-)Punk Rock

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Hallo zusammen, ich bin ja eigentlich nicht so in der Vocals-Ecke zu Hause,
möchte jetzt aber mal meinen ersten (fertigen) Text vorstellen. Das Ganze soll
instrumental in Richtung melodischer Punk Rock gehen. (sowas wie bspw. Hot Water Music)
Kommentare/ Verbesserungsvorschläge etc. sind natürlich sehr willkommen!




My Grief Is Better Than your Grief

It’s hard to understand
how we ended up in this place
and it’s hard to tell
whether we should carry on or let go
of all we things we held so close
when the walls will finally cave in

have you ever wondered why
we always chase the things that fade away?

if you hold onto something steady
while aching for a new start
keep in mind that the burden that you carry
is just the weight of your own heart

it’s hard to believe
that this is where we wanted to be
and it’s hard to untangle
the roads we took to get here
at least there is a comforting sense of calm
out here in the cold

have you ever lost track of
all the places you’ve never been to?

if you hold onto something steady
while aching for a new start
keep in mind that the burden that you carry
is just the weight of your own heart

just the weight of your own heart

but for now, I’m contend with survival
and I guess that’s life…