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Ein Text für ein Lied, das ich geschrieben habe, was eher in die Metal-Ecke geht(Länge ca. 13 Minuten).
Das Stück besteht aus 3 Teilen und erzählt die Geschichte eines Anderdenkenden, der mit der Gesellschaft aneinandergerät und in den Wahnsinn verfällt.
Da das ganze relative progressiv ist, variiert die Länge der Zeilen tw. stark.
Part1: Ausgangsituation
Show me, where I'm going to.
Tell me, if it's the road to perfection
or insanity.
invoking confusions,
building up nightmares,
destroying illusions,
pretending, one might care.
I just want to pick mushrooms from the skies,
I just want to build up castles of ice.
Part2.1: Beschuldigen der Gesellschaft
Am I the only one unmasked at this ball?
Is it false to show emotions in this place,
if insanity will show it's true face,
when the drapery falls?
I don't see, why explosions are worthy to be adored
After watching you for so long I'm sure, that logic is a whore.
worshipping technology,
trust in rationality,
wicked calculations repel
your barbarian cruelty.
Part 2.2: Die Gesellschaft antwortet:
Could one imagine?
We, the fathers of nations
pestered by your impatience?
Incommoded by your impudence
under such dire circumstances?
We are the puppeteers my dear,
we trade with anger and fear,
there's nothing sacred
in a world full of hatred.
Kill the signs of extasy,
individuality,
wipe out personality,
every single tragedy,
and feast upon the loyality,
the mind is our new currency,
welcome to reality,
glorious rationality!
Part 3: Abdriften in den Wahnsinn
wear the success like a crown
scared of a let-go, let-down.
Wash away the scars,
reach for distant stars,
desperately trying not to drown.
I'm not a victim
of rationality
I think with my heart
allowing my emotions
to tear me apart.
I invoke the demons of the past,
my private little bane,
and at last
I begin to feel insane.
world's on fire,
ash clouds rise,
rage and ire,
paradise.
Ich hoffe, man kann anhand der Lyrics eine gewisse "Entwicklung" nachvollziehen.
Ich habe die Perspektive eines Geisteskranken gewählt, um die Vorwürfe an die Gesellschaft, sie sei emotionslos und arbeite auf ihre Zerstörung hin, abzuschwächen, damit das ganze keine Antwort gibt, sondern lediglich Fragen aufwirft.
Würde mich über feedback freuen
Das Stück besteht aus 3 Teilen und erzählt die Geschichte eines Anderdenkenden, der mit der Gesellschaft aneinandergerät und in den Wahnsinn verfällt.
Da das ganze relative progressiv ist, variiert die Länge der Zeilen tw. stark.
Part1: Ausgangsituation
Show me, where I'm going to.
Tell me, if it's the road to perfection
or insanity.
invoking confusions,
building up nightmares,
destroying illusions,
pretending, one might care.
I just want to pick mushrooms from the skies,
I just want to build up castles of ice.
Part2.1: Beschuldigen der Gesellschaft
Am I the only one unmasked at this ball?
Is it false to show emotions in this place,
if insanity will show it's true face,
when the drapery falls?
I don't see, why explosions are worthy to be adored
After watching you for so long I'm sure, that logic is a whore.
worshipping technology,
trust in rationality,
wicked calculations repel
your barbarian cruelty.
Part 2.2: Die Gesellschaft antwortet:
Could one imagine?
We, the fathers of nations
pestered by your impatience?
Incommoded by your impudence
under such dire circumstances?
We are the puppeteers my dear,
we trade with anger and fear,
there's nothing sacred
in a world full of hatred.
Kill the signs of extasy,
individuality,
wipe out personality,
every single tragedy,
and feast upon the loyality,
the mind is our new currency,
welcome to reality,
glorious rationality!
Part 3: Abdriften in den Wahnsinn
wear the success like a crown
scared of a let-go, let-down.
Wash away the scars,
reach for distant stars,
desperately trying not to drown.
I'm not a victim
of rationality
I think with my heart
allowing my emotions
to tear me apart.
I invoke the demons of the past,
my private little bane,
and at last
I begin to feel insane.
world's on fire,
ash clouds rise,
rage and ire,
paradise.
Ich hoffe, man kann anhand der Lyrics eine gewisse "Entwicklung" nachvollziehen.
Ich habe die Perspektive eines Geisteskranken gewählt, um die Vorwürfe an die Gesellschaft, sie sei emotionslos und arbeite auf ihre Zerstörung hin, abzuschwächen, damit das ganze keine Antwort gibt, sondern lediglich Fragen aufwirft.
Würde mich über feedback freuen
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