Love's just a timeless game

[Maddi]

Hoi,

mal was anderes. Mal wieder das ausgelutschte Thema > Liebe.



Love's just a timeless game


It´s been a long way
a long way road to us

I thought it could change
I thought it could evolve in some time
But I fear it will never be ok

Love has to evolve
from time to time
Love has to become
eternely
But it needs time
some of it
It just has to evolve


Do you get it?
What was it for?

I thought you were different
I thought you would know me
But it is, as it is, you're just the same


Love has to evolve
from time to time
Love has to become
eternely
But it needs time
some of it
It just has to evolve

I need my time to think a lot
I need my space to give up on me
I need my time regenerate
I need , I need
Or I fall
I fall
fall down


Love has to evolve
from time to time
Love has to become
eternely
But it needs time
some of it
It just has to evolve

sometime...


Über Feedback und Anmerkung etc. würde ich mich freuen.

Thx grüßle eure Maddi

 

[desgraca]

Love's just a timeless game


It´s been a long way
a long way road to us
a long road to us

I thought it could change
I thought it could evolve in some time
evolve with time
But I fear it will never be ok

Love has to evolve
from time to time
Love has to become
eternely
eternal
But it needs time
but it takes time
some of it
some time
It just has to evolve


Do you get it?
What was it for?

I thought you were different
I thought you would know me
But it is, as it is, you're just the same


I need my time to think a lot
besser -my
I need my space to give up on me
hmmm give up on myself...
I need my time regenerate
to recover
I need , I need
Or I fall
or i'll fall . i'll fall fall down
I fall
fall down


von dem angemerkten mal abgesehen find ichs ganz gut

 

[x-Riff]

Also bei dieser Stelle mußte ich schmunzeln:

Love has to become
eternal
But it takes time

Weil - na ja - bis zur Unendlichkeit braucht es halt immer etwas Zeit ...

Sonst hat´s was - aber so ohne Musik bekomme ich kein rechtes Gefühl zu dem Text.

x-Riff

 

[donay]

hmmm give up on myself...
I need my time regenerate
to recover
wie wärs mitnem komma, i need my time, regenerate... Das fändich ganz starch


find den text sehr gut. traurig ohne kitschig und irgendwie ehrlich. starch.

ps: würd gern mehr schreiben aber der firefox ist gerade zu blöd den text editor richtig anzuzeigen, und so ists extrem mühsam...

aber:
weiter so!

 

[desgraca]

regenerate nicht gleich "sich erholen"

 

[donay]

ja, das stimmt. ich dachte halt auch mehr vom lyrischen her, fände ich da ein verb nach dem komma schön. so als befehl an sich selbst quasi... welches wort nun zu verwenden ist, weiss ich nicht

 

[Maddi]

hey

@nate: Vielen Dank für die Wortsäuberung

@x-riff: Ich wollt den Song auch ausnahmsweise mal aufnehmen, und stelle ihn dann in nächster Zeit ins Hörproben Forum. Bin gespannt was draus wird.

@donay:Vielen Dank fürs Feedback und die Vorschläge

also ich mach mich denn mal rann an den Song.

grüße Maddi