"let me know"

[armyclonk]

hi leuts,
unser zwoter eigener song ist in der mache und nun wollte ich euch mal nen blick drüber werfen lassen.

stilistisch geht in richtung postgrunge, vielleicht mit nen bissle new-metal anteil, mal sehn.


stare into the night
pale blue colored sky
everything i see
is everything i need
everything is gone
the air to breath is gone
and i wait for the dawn
to see the things to come
--------------------------------------------------
this is where we go
this is where we stand
this is how i used to know
the world, but it ends
tell me where to go
tell me what you've told
tell me what you see
i want you to see
--------------------------------------------------
REFRAIN
so just let me know
what you see in me
is it
the man on your side
let me know
--------------------------------------------------
see through all our past
all that days that passed
....
and tell me how
this could ever happen
....
cause i dont know
x2
--------------------------------------------------
REFRAIN x2
--------------------------------------------------
BRIDGE
so here i am to stand by you
here i am, i'm waiting
you want to hear the truth
but the truth is a lie
so here i am to stand by you
here i am, i'm waiting
better believe this lie
cause the lie is your life
--------------------------------------------------
stare into the night
pale blue colored sky
everything i see
is everything i need
everything is gone
the air to breath is gone
and i wait for the dawn
to see the things to come
x2
--------------------------------------------------

 

[yrt]

Ich mach mal ein paar Änderungsvorschläge:

hi leuts,
stare into the night
pale blue colored sky
everything i see
is everything i need
everything is gone
the air to breathe is gone
and i wait for the dawn
to see the things to come
--------------------------------------------------
this is where we go
this is where we stand
this is how i used to know
the world, but it ends
tell me where to go
tell me what you've told
tell me what you see
i want you to see
--------------------------------------------------
REFRAIN
so just let me know
what you see in me
is it
the man on at your side
let me know
--------------------------------------------------
see through all our past
all that the days that passed
....
and tell me how
this could ever happen
....
cause i dont know
x2
--------------------------------------------------
REFRAIN x2
--------------------------------------------------
BRIDGE
so here i am to stand by you
here i am, i'm waiting
you want to hear the truth
but the truth is a lie
so here i am to stand by you
here i am, i'm waiting
better believe this lie
cause the lie is your life
--------------------------------------------------
stare into the night
pale blue colored sky
everything i see
is everything i need
everything is gone
the air to breath is gone
and i wait for the dawn
to see the things to come
x2
--------------------------------------------------

Gut geschrieben finde ich. Jetzt als Text alleine nicht so aufregend, aber das kommt ja vielleicht durch die Umsetzung?