willypanic
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Hallo,
habe mal einen enlischsprachigen Text hier und würde gerne wissen,
ob das so geht, bzw welche sprachlichen Fehler ihr findet.
Danke fürs feedback.
Grüße
willy
If I am
Looking like a dead-head
its just my brain thats seventeen
I am a father without a solution
There are so many kids I have never seen
So Im in a car crash
In a city where I have never been
And I drink with these pornstars
Some dreams are so mean
So leave me in Town where my skin never sleeps
or take me to rest, where sleep never ends
And if im lonely here in my life
Come on in and get me out of this bed
Even if I seem to be angry in this hive
Its still lonely here in my head
So, I finished writing
Since my singing was no more in time
And Ill begin reading
Cause some stories have to be mine
So gimme back my Toys and gimme my brands
And Ill find a way back to my fake friends
Ref:
habe mal einen enlischsprachigen Text hier und würde gerne wissen,
ob das so geht, bzw welche sprachlichen Fehler ihr findet.
Danke fürs feedback.
Grüße
willy
If I am
Looking like a dead-head
its just my brain thats seventeen
I am a father without a solution
There are so many kids I have never seen
So Im in a car crash
In a city where I have never been
And I drink with these pornstars
Some dreams are so mean
So leave me in Town where my skin never sleeps
or take me to rest, where sleep never ends
And if im lonely here in my life
Come on in and get me out of this bed
Even if I seem to be angry in this hive
Its still lonely here in my head
So, I finished writing
Since my singing was no more in time
And Ill begin reading
Cause some stories have to be mine
So gimme back my Toys and gimme my brands
And Ill find a way back to my fake friends
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