erster text für band metalcore/deathcore

[firewarhate]

Strophe:
this is my last day, a rope is my way
it`s the point which’s called zero
don`t believe what they say

life is a worthless enemy
down on knees, cramp in head
lost my life in my hands
it seems to end, can`t stay anymore
could it be could it be
the river of sadness turns into a sea
you`re the one you`re my life
you were everthing and you`re gone

so sad about everything, you and me
what should i do here, i lost it all
guestions and no answers in life

this is my last day (4x)

Refrain:
i think about the days before you leave
let a rope do the talking
set me free

i think about the days before you leave
let a rope do the talking
want to leave

Strophe:
i drown my eyes, they get blind
beyond the light beyond the light
before the sun has reached the sky

this is my last day (4x)

wanted the truth, wanted the faith
all is said and everthing is done
there is nothing to hold on
frozen the moment all the time
say goodbye, leaving with a smile
think of you, my heart, i can't avoid
death took it all, took it all away
only these empty beats

Refrain:
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verbesserung und kritiken sind erwünscht

 

[Garry-Groupie]

alos ich habe nichts anzumerkne..
ich finde man sollte den text nicht kritisieren..
den text habt ihr geschreiben..
ihr spielt den song und vertretet ihn somit..
da sollte also acuh sonst niemand wa daran ändern..
->meine meinung ;-)