erste lyrics ausgegraben - komm nich klar

[wiz1989]

Ja, wie der Titel schon sagt, bin ich mal wieder auf meinen allerersten song gestoßen. fand die idee damals an sich ganz gut, nur an der umsetzung hats gehapert. mittlerweile komm ich mitm komponieren ganz gut klar, aber bei dem ding hier schaff ichs einfach nicht was vernünftiges rauszubekommen. kann sein, dasses daran liegt, dasses schon recht alt is und sich hierfür ne blockade in mir aufgebaut hat oder i-sowas xD
auch egal...
jedenfalls wollt ich euch fragen, ob ihr vllt vorschläge für nen besseren text oder für die melodie habt. hab das zwar alles schon gehabt, aber wie gesagt...red mer net davon^^

Rock Star


I am sitting here for hours,
Just waiting for a call.
I'm thinkin' 'bout the last night
And how drunk I was.

When I saw you there, the first time,
I played my air guitar
And I knew: I gotta have ya!

Refrain:
'cause I'm a Rock Star,
and you are my guitar.
I played ya once,
And immediately it was love.
So stay with me,
'cause I am a Rock Star
and please be my guitar.
__________________________________

I asked you for your number,
You said,";Just gi'me yours";.
I did and then we danced,
And had a lot of fun.

When the party ended, you just
asked me if I'd come
to you and stay the night.

Refrain:
'cause I'm a Rock Star,
and you are my guitar.
I played ya once,
And immediately it was love.
So stay with me,
'cause I am a Rock Star
and please be my guitar.
__________________________________

You've never called me back…
And I see clearly know.
I only was a toy for you.
That's hard…

Refrain:
But I'm a Rock Star
And you were my guitar.
I played you once,
But for you it was just fun.
I must admit, that's my way, too.
I also live the way you do.

Refrain:
'cause I'm a Rock Star
And you were my guitar.
I played you once,
But for you it was just fun.
I must admit, that's my way, too.
I used you once and that is true.