Englischer Text: Sleep Walker

[Stranger]

Hi!
Hab mal wieder eine kleine Schnulze geschrieben, aber dazu hatte ich nunmal grade Lust.
Für mehr reichte meine Kreativität nicht

Bin mal gespannt was so alles auseinander genommen wird. Auf geht's!



Am I dreaming, no this can't be true
I always wondered the way I'd feel
When I'm standing right in front of you
I must be dreaming this ain't real

I can't tell what is revolving in my head
I don't know what I'm thinking about
Why am I feeling so damn sad
I talk to you cause I'm thinking loud

Never do a step to the left or right
Never walk out of my sight
And never turn off the light
Please stay at where I can see your eyes

An eddy appears colored white and blue
I'm walking right into it and disappear
My life hurts without standing in front of you
But I'll never come back, my dear

Never do a step to the left or right
Never walk out of my sight
And never turn off the light
Please stay at where I can see your eyes

An eddy appears colored white and blue
That's where I walk right into
Just to get away from you
A cloud appears somewhere right above
A place to hide from your love
And my own love
A hole opens right beneath my feet
I can't avoid falling into the deep
Well, I must have fallen into sleep

 

[desgraca]

Am I dreaming, no this can't be true
I always wondered the way I'd feel
wondered how i'd feel
When I'm standing right in front of you
I must be dreaming this ain't real

I can't tell what is revolving in my head
I don't know what I'm thinking about
Why am I feeling so damn sad
I talk to you cause I'm thinking loud

Never do a step to the left or right
Never walk out of my sight
And never turn off the light
Please stay at where I can see your eyes
besser ohne at

An eddy appears colored white and blue
I'm walking right into it and disappear
My life hurts without standing in front of you
-without+ when i'm not
But I'll never come back, my dear

An eddy appears colored white and blue
That's where I walk right into
is bissel unklar die stelle
Just to get away from you
A cloud appears somewhere right above
A place to hide from your love
And my own love
A hole opens right beneath my feet
das appears und das opens könnte man wie oben wieder in verlaufsform setzen, das wär bissel konsequenter
I can't avoid falling into the deep
Well, I must have fallen into sleep
die präpositionen am ende sind ein bisschen eigenwillig, kann man aber so lassen, finde ich...."fallen into sleep" klingt halt irgendwie brutaler als "fallen asleep".

öhm ja.....den anfang fand ich reichlich cheesy, aber am ende hast du noch echt geschickt die kurve gekriegt *find*

 

[Stranger]

Danke fürs verbessern Nate.

Na ist halt keine ganz so hochwertige gescichte wie das davor, aber ich finds auch gar nicht so schlecht.

 

[x-Riff]

äh - wer oder was ist denn eddy

 

[Stranger]

Eddy ist ein Strudel (nicht der essbare)

 

[x-Riff]

Thanx