Electropop auf Piano

[Originality]

Moin,

Hätte gern' Feedback für ein Lied, das ich geschrieben habe.
Eigentlich ist es Electropop, aber ich habe euch die Piano Version hochgeladen, weil das Instrumental mit Synthies, Drums usw. noch nicht zu 100% fertig ist.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/75925692534bb0c2/

Lyrics (Suche noch eine Sängerin, die lust hat das Lied einzusingen.):

Oh-Oh-Oh-Oh,

I came up,
Felt lit,
Saw him,
I took a hit,
I took a heart,
His eyes got me mesmerized,
I came over to him,
He was super fly,
Got me behave like a jerk,
His eyes got me hypnotized,
And the party turned into a super night,

Boy dressed in white,
He made me fly,
He made me fly, Oh, I was high,
Yeah,
He made me almost toch the sky,
My drug was the look in his eyes,
Hurts to know he won't stay by my side,
Though I felt he is the right,
Though I felt he is the right, right, right,

Oh-Oh-Oh-Oh,
He made me fly,
He made me fly, Oh, I was high,
Yeah,
He made me almost toch the sky,
My drug was the look in his eyes,
Hurts to know he won't stay by my side,
Though I felt he is the right,
Though I felt he is the right, right, right,

Boy dressed in white,
Oh Yeah, he made me fly,
He made me fly,
Oh Yeah, He made me fly,

We danced slow,
Dimmed lighs,
Felt nice,
We left this life,
We left this club,
His eyes got me mesmerized,
We drove out of the light,
He was super fly,
Got me fell in love that night,
His eyes got me hypnotized,
And the party turned into a super night,

Boy dressed in white,
He made me fly,
He made me fly, Oh, I was high,
Yeah,
He made me almost toch the sky,
My drug was the look in his eyes,
Hurts to know he won't stay by my side,
Though I felt he is the right,
Though I felt he is the right, right, right,

Oh-Oh-Oh-Oh,
He made me fly,
He made me fly, Oh, I was high,
Yeah,
He made me almost toch the sky,
My drug was the look in his eyes,
Hurts to know he won't stay by my side,
Though I felt he is the right,
Though I felt he is the right, right, right,

Boy dressed in white,
Oh Yeah, he made me fly,
He made me fly,
Oh Yeah, He made me fly,
Boy dressed in white,
Oh Yeah, he made me fly,
He made me fly,
Oh Yeah, He made me fly,


Danke für's Interesse.

Gruß
Originality

 

[Freidag13]

Also ich finds nicht schlecht, sehr eingängige Melodie. Mit was hast Du das erstellt? Mittels Midi-File und VSTi? Schreib doch mal etwas über das verwendete Equipment.

Edit: Zu dem Text sag ich aber mal nichts, ist nicht mein Fall.