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Hab ich ma in kürze geschriebenSehr verwirrt und teilwiese lustig.


Have you ever tried to eat your head
or asked yourself if this is mad
and have you ever tried to rain
or looked up your nose to see your brain?

All these are the question which no one will answer

Have you ever dreamed of being a bug?
or seen two trees when they fuck
have you ever screamed inside a glass
and listened to the message lying in the grass

All these are the question which no one will answer

Have you ever crawled inside yourself?
or stood in the corner pretend being a shelf?
Have you ever been an ocean?
or walked backwards in slow motion?

All these are the question which no one will answer

Have you ever been a banana
and tried to sing of janajana
Have you ever layed on a pizza
while waiting inside the heata

All these are the question which no one will answer

Have you ever seen a tank peeing
or an organismic mechanic being
Have you ever eaten one o your toes
or did you think of doing it in shows
 
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cgpwild schrieb:

Have you ever tried to eat your head
or asked yourself if this is mad ich glaub, das muss was mad heißen
and have you ever tried to rain
or looked up your nose to see your brain?

All these are the questions which no one will answer Das which würde ich streichen: all these are questions no one will answer

Have you ever dreamed of being a bug?
or seen two trees when they fuck Alternative wäre: or seen two trees having a fuck
have you ever screamed inside a glass
and listened to the message lying in the grass Hier könnte ich mir auch Mehrzahl vorstellen: and listened to messages (lying) in the grass

All these are the question which no one will answer siehe oben

Have you ever crawled inside yourself?
or stood in the corner pretend being a shelf? Haut das von den Silben her hin? Sonst vielleicht: stood in a corner pretending to be a shelf oder direkter: stood in a corner pretending "I am a shelf!"
Have you ever been an ocean?
or walked backwards in slow motion?

All these are the question which no one will answer siehe oben

Have you ever been a banana
and tried to sing of janajana
Have you ever layed on a pizza
while waiting inside the heata heater?

All these are the question which no one will answer siehe oben

Have you ever seen a tank peeing
or an organismic mechanic being
Have you ever eaten one of your toes
or did you think of doing it in shows Das geht ein bißchen schwerfällig, finde ich. Vielleicht: or thought of doing this in shows

Gefällt mir, der Text. Psychodelisch, irrational, sehr bildlich. Kann ich mir sehr schön Musik zu vorstellen (Beatles, Captain Beefheart, frühe Pink Floyed - wären so meine Assoziationen).

x-Riff
 
cgpwild schrieb:
Hab ich ma in kürze geschriebenSehr verwirrt und teilwiese lustig.


Have you ever tried to eat your head
or asked yourself if this is mad jap. muss "was mad" heissen
and have you ever tried to rain
or looked up your nose to see your brain?

All these are the question which no one will answer questions no one will answer

Have you ever dreamed of being a bug?
or seen two trees when they fuck LOL sehr geil
have you ever screamed inside a glass
and listened to the message lying in the grass

All these are the question which no one will answer s.o.

Have you ever crawled inside yourself?
or stood in the corner pretend being a shelf?
Have you ever been an ocean? Have you ever tried to be an ocean fänd ich besser
or walked backwards in slow motion?

All these are the question which no one will answer

Have you ever been a banana wie wärs mit "blue Banana"? wegen der Unmöglichkeit der Sache? Nur als vorschlag
and tried to sing of janajana
Have you ever layed on a pizza layed down on dough
while waiting inside the heata maybe this was my first thought
nur als vorschlag weil mir die Zeilen irgendwie net so zusagen

All these are the question which no one will answer s.o.

Have you ever seen a tank peeing
or an organismic mechanic being
Have you ever eaten one o your toes one of your toes
or did you think of doing it in shows did a childish handstand as i grew
wieder nur ein vorschlag. finde wie x-riff dass das ende net so passt!

Im Ganzen??? Sehr geil lol musste oft lachen!
Allerdings denke ich eher an Placebo als an die Beatles ;)
Weiter so... hast noch einen in dem Style? Würd ihn gern lesen... LG
 
Einen hab ich noch.Hab ich nach nem Traum von mir geschrieben kurz vor meiner rom fahrt.

children are jumping in the river
saved by people jumping of roofs
a big scared homosexual rocker
and russias soccer pride

why do you wanna see the river?
why can't we go to the zoo?

A man in shorts and slippers
the harvest of the pizzas has begun

the pope is screaming words of solace
and the sun is shining on his head
mushrooms are running in the river
and a fisher's scared of fish

why do you wanna see the river?
why can't we go to the zoo?

A man in shorts and slippers
the harvest of the pizzas has begun

to light a candle is never free
and where are my wet clothes
my money is lost inside the bar
the stripping girl has prurple hair

why do you wanna see the river?
why can't we go to the zoo?

A man in shorts and slippers
the harvest of the pizzas has begun

My fathers tells me where to go
and i slaughter rats inside the dome
sarah says hello and vanishes
i follow to the buddhist chamber

why do you wanna see the river?
why can't we go to the zoo?

A man in shorts and slippers
the harvest of the pizzas has begun

children are jumping in the river
saved by people jumping of roofs
a big scared homosexual rocker
and russias soccer pride

Der ist zwar nicht so lustig aber dafür sehr verwirrt.:screwy:

 
aahhhmmm.....JA, er ist verwirrend aber ich mag ihn irgendwie lol

the harvest of the pizzas has begun
ziemlich krank aber ziemlich geil lol

hab keinen fehler entdeckt ausser nen rechtschreibfehler bei purple hair

gibts davon umsetzungen? würd ich zu gern hören!
 

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