JTE
Registrierter Benutzer
gaaanz wackelig, ganz frisch, ganz zerbrechlich. der iss ganz und gar nicht fertig, ich such nur...njaa, nach einer Richtung..und da wollte ich hier mal wieder um Feedback bitten...
grüße und danke schonmal,
JTE
PS: die Unterstrich-Zeilen im Chorus sollen zusammengezogen werden, so dass "too" keiner Zeile def. zuordenbar ist
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I am on my way
To the middle of my thoughts
My feet are stuck in glue
On a viscous road of words
The nerds are pushing forth
The fools are stepping back
So an advice to myself
Could be to drill right where I´m at…
Cause nothing is of worth,
Except the size of your need
Gold, a friend, the truth…and love
Not far off, but hiding deep
Hey me it´s you
Nice to meet you too_
_bad we can´t shake hands
Though we consider ourselves friends
Hey you it´s me
And…to be yourself is not that easy
Thought I was on my way…
to the core of the sun
but now I´m buried down…
in the darkness of the ground
Light a candle in
Shadows wave around my being
I´m inside of my skin
To watch a dream on my forehead screen
Hey me it´s you
Nice to meet you too_
_bad we can´t shake hands
Though we consider ourselves friends
Hey you it´s me
And…to be yourself is not that easy
I was on my way to a masterpiece of tone
But I´m left here deaf in an opera of moan
And a salty tear is my only friend
To listen to how I deceive myself
grüße und danke schonmal,
JTE
PS: die Unterstrich-Zeilen im Chorus sollen zusammengezogen werden, so dass "too" keiner Zeile def. zuordenbar ist
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I am on my way
To the middle of my thoughts
My feet are stuck in glue
On a viscous road of words
The nerds are pushing forth
The fools are stepping back
So an advice to myself
Could be to drill right where I´m at…
Cause nothing is of worth,
Except the size of your need
Gold, a friend, the truth…and love
Not far off, but hiding deep
Hey me it´s you
Nice to meet you too_
_bad we can´t shake hands
Though we consider ourselves friends
Hey you it´s me
And…to be yourself is not that easy
Thought I was on my way…
to the core of the sun
but now I´m buried down…
in the darkness of the ground
Light a candle in
Shadows wave around my being
I´m inside of my skin
To watch a dream on my forehead screen
Hey me it´s you
Nice to meet you too_
_bad we can´t shake hands
Though we consider ourselves friends
Hey you it´s me
And…to be yourself is not that easy
I was on my way to a masterpiece of tone
But I´m left here deaf in an opera of moan
And a salty tear is my only friend
To listen to how I deceive myself
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